It’s good turn,
It’s obvious,
I felt ever in my life,
But,
This change is incomparable,
Than previous,
Late but not least,
Harder to softer,
Fire to water,
Rock to flower,
Matter to soul,
&
Now only,
Pleasure to pleasure,
Fresh flowing blowing energy,
Each moment,
Amazing,
I have learnt ever my life,
But,
This time I only sing,
Only dance,
Beautiful imaginations,
Thoughts earlier too I have had,
But,
It’s only you,
Who inspired,
To write, to express,
The truth of silence,
To make witness of silent flow,
That me & you have ever felt,
Though you are only catalyst,
But,
Memories of silent emotion,
Will give you the silent imagination,
Never will you be able to be out of it,
I am sure,
Your heart will also sing,
The pleasure full silent music,
That I ever have.
you know this 10th time i am reading this poem before commenting ...every time these line force me to think what is more beautiful magical line or deep meaning behind this???
ReplyDeletei must say both...yeah this time i m sure..amazing poem...
emotion is not enough we all have that but the way you are writing really touches heart...
Tasty food for stomach…… and wealthy literature for mind….. Exceptionally well presented…… science student will find themselves curious on “what kind of catalyst is this? Can we measure it?”…….
ReplyDelete@Sarika, If the poetic wave flowing blowing through your mind & body at the time of reading that means it has achieved what it would to be. Thanks that you have enjoyed the same way I am enjoying every time I read.
ReplyDelete@Neeraj, Have you seen people worship “ShivLing” a stone quite-silent stone, but that’s inspire you to worship same kind of catalyst is here but you have to travel one more step through physics to metaphysics where you can see & feel the dancing of atom and can listen the vibration of universe ……thanks lot you enjoyed the journey of poem through science to the soul……:)
ReplyDeleteI think i got the catalyst of yours........
ReplyDeleteI always wondered that it’s really impossible to explain the world (physics) around you without complex mathematics but I think your poems has a hidden path in it towards illumination and will enlighten your readers…..BEST WISHES…… Great work….
@Neeraj, I think physics is the simplest thing in which you need to think simply with micro steps in your mind, it became mash when you jump these steps & as you know mathematics is the language to represent physics, so people often get stuck with its logic while it is in reality nothing but that hidden micro steps. Poet, mathematician, physicist they are doing the same thing in different way but the common is they are able to see these hidden patterns.
ReplyDeleteThanks to bring the poetic conversation scientific.....cheers.....:)
Very true…. I think physics is nothing but it’s a way of finding hidden truth of nature or universe …..physicist worship truth….. if a poem begets truth it’s kind of spicy physics(cz you can enjoy the rhythm of poem )…. Mathematics is something like rhythm of music which makes physics (here poem) a melodious song….. cheers
ReplyDeleteAs from evolution of life, how full moon is attracting each one of us while we never able to even touch the moon and every imagination is one sided the moon has never participated but inspired only. Here moon is also a similar catalyst as of mine. The phenomenon of universal flow is not only for me & you but it’s for all & to feel these force, energy is physics, mathematics and poem, these are the symbolic representation only how we can map or compare with anything.
ReplyDeleteMoon attracts different philosophers in different way….. For astronauts it’s something like it challenges them “come reach me and satisfy your thirst”……but for poets its different they symbolize moon some time for beauty some time as symbol of love….. In Ramayana Tulshidash says ‘Lord Ram even feels the heat of the moon in memory of sita’ beyond the imaginations of all the intellectual existing physicists…
ReplyDeleteReaders may get confused about how one can feel the heat of moon….but I think we discussed a lot about superconductivity it’s time to discuss some super sensitivity…
Really great sequence is going on …..
ReplyDeleteAs we physicist are aware of potential difference as even ice is warmer if it is kept in minus ten degree Celsius, so it seems confusing to get heat from moon but as we are aware of relativity & frame of reference it’s very easy to understand how it is possible….As I have written earlier that if one can see the micro pattern of universal phenomena he may the physicist, mathematician, poet…as the lines by Tulshidas itself proof of that he has that insight as a physicist has.
Thanks for clarifying my lines to others ….and thanks for calling us a physicist…never had such a feeling of being a physicist…
ReplyDelete@Sarika totally agreed with your view ….A wonderful and amazing poem I had ever read. Your all poems have its unique approach.
ReplyDeleteIn this universe everybody/particle tries to minimize its energy/potential Energy, a perfect example water bubble, the tension upon water surface. Poet, physicist, follows this rule. In few word poets tries to explain the whole world and physicist tries to explore the world with formulae. Same thing you will found in a chemistry lab while playing with the chemicals… In our universe everywhere one can get the joys rhythm of science and colorful vibrational flow of emotion….
Thank u all to force me to think the things differently and for making such kind of platform..I’ll surely get the immense knowledge and energy from here.
@Priyanka, truly said,i agree, Thanks :)
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